Intober Day 1

Day 1- Backpack

Today's Prompt was Backpack... This was my attempt at it. I am very disappointed in myself.

I think the deltoids(especially on the right arm) are awful. The proportions are terrible as well. that forearm should be much thicker and both the forearm and rear?arm should be longer so that it goes off-screen. I tried to add some light shading to the hat but it just ended up making it worse. I think I need to practice drawing arms from behind more... hahaha

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